Libertie (Spoilers Contained in Discussion)
By - BrightFireFly
I agree!! I feel like after Libertie made it to Haiti, it turned into a totally different story.
There would be passages where exciting things would happen, like when >!it was revealed that Ella was MAD!< but then pages later, >!psych, she and Emmanuel just made that story up!< . Like, the constant undermining in the second half of the novel made me feel like I didn't care about the characters.
That said, it did come back around for me in the last five pages when, >!Libertie gave birth and finally wrote her mother back!<. The letters were probably my favorite part.