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After a few days inside the shelter, we noticed that the infected outside finally had dropped dead out of lack of nourishment.

After a few days inside the shelter, we noticed that the infected outside finally had dropped dead out of lack of nourishment.

daffyuglyduck

Ooooh


MrRikkles

Oh WOW...


SnowflaketheSnowball

Ooo, I've never seen that take before!


Kanga_

I’d watch this.


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28 months later...


TeaVarious2461

Possum Virus


tH3_gl1tCh01

Ooooooooooooooooooooooooo. I like it.


EducationOutside897

This would make a great plot for a zombie movie


newpizzas

It also mutated to look like supplies


PickleRick567

Morgan is that Yu?


Michael_NSC

Hahahaha


Lorikeeter

ZOMBIE MIMICS


Nuclear-LMG

I like this, though I think you could have done more with the 2nd sentence. Like instead of going straight to the point and getting rid of any mystery by telling us what the virus is doing, you could have shown us instead. Right after supplies you could have said “but when the door opened all the glassed over eyes of the dead shifted to meet ours as their lifeless corpses started to rise.” Eh but who the fuck am I. the straight forward method seemed to work for you.


dragonema

Ooooh. I like that a lot. I get your point about the second sentence. I specifically mentioned that the virus was faking death as I wanted to show the virus evolving to mimic aspects of nature, but the the way you wrote it feels more creepy. Love it.


daffyuglyduck

Lmao


neil_anblowmi

Oh fuck!


Truebuckshot01

So FO 4 feral ghouls? Lol


daffyuglyduck

Is fallout 4 as fun as fallout 3?


zestyseal

Yeah, pretty much


daffyuglyduck

Great I’ll have to see if I can buy it


daffyuglyduck

Great, I’ll see if I can buy it


Responsible_Cry3150

But we where lucky I didn’t know how to get up


Qwertayguy

I was thinking about this but instead of dropping dead but shouting "HELP" and then hide then ambush.


dragonema

Oooooh. Even better.


Qwertayguy

I just realized you can barely read it.


dragonema

Don't worry, I still got the idea xD


Qwertayguy

Thanks


HeckingSnackMyGuy90

Actually, in this situation, it would be its, as "it's" is a shortened form of it is. But cool story though.


dragonema

Woops. You are right. I'll fix that thanks.


mrsparkyboi69

Doesnt really matter


HeckingSnackMyGuy90

Bro you are waaay late to the commenting on this comment party


mrsparkyboi69

The fuck do you mean its just been 5 hours


HeckingSnackMyGuy90

Five hours is a long time bruh. Its almost tomorrow right now, so in relative context you are a day late


mrsparkyboi69

What Why does it matter


HeckingSnackMyGuy90

Why did you need to comment. What force required you to comment. You had no obligation to comment on my comment. And while yes i didnt need to comment on the original post. Theres a double reason that you did not need to comment on mine. Thusly, you are wasting my time and keeping me awake.


mrsparkyboi69

Do you think i care


HeckingSnackMyGuy90

Do you think i do? Im far too tired to give any real emotional input. This is just, fun for me. Seeing people, waste precious seconds. Ticking down their own clock for no other reason. Genuinely fun.


Zekimot0

Bruh your comments are far too long for someone that doesn't care.