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I liked the background music, camera position and the pacing of the whole video. The idea was funny too. Maybe you could do some work on the thumbnail? The color of the font isn't well adjusted with the background. It's harder to read. Otherwise, great video. Both of them acted very nicely.


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tylerunderground

As the other user said, thumbnail work is super important. Start looking at thumbnails of the bigger channels that you’d like to do that kind of content with. Background color, text color and size all have a huge impact on if someone will click on your video!


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Thanks! !givelambda


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this is honestly a really good video i like the music and everything, i do think the thumbnail needs a little work, but it’s not bad imo. i think the bit at the end was funny but just to help with retention time you may have been better off without it because usually sketches like these tend to be shorter. but that’s it i think it was a really good video


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Cheers! Appreciate the commente and critique. def will be stepping up my thumbnail game. !givelambda


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ItsDolphinBoy

I actually really enjoyed the video made me laugh a few times. I gave it a like. However I think you need to either speak louder or increase the audio loudness because the conversation sounded a bit quiet. In terms of your thumbnail I would suggest not using pink as a background maybe get a photo to use and the writing I would suggest not to be highlighted. Keep making cool videos. 👍


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Appreciate it! Thanks for liking and thanks for the critique. !givelambda


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RedditGuy_MP

haha! I found this quite entertaining! well done lol "you smell incorrect" was my favourite line lol The only thing I didn't love was the lighting- just felt off. Otherwise keep it up!


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wenbilson

Not many channels make sketch comedy and nearly none of them get it right. I felt yours hit the mark incredibly well. I don’t make sketch comedy (neither does most of this rabble) so take these critiques with a huge grain of salt. It’s obvious you know what does and doesn’t work. I always believed comedy rested on the performance, and you were both naturally funny. Very funny. I really wasn’t in the fucking mood today and this cheered me up. Great stuff. Only feed back I can give is the thumbnail (like everyone has said at this point) Coverage. There were some moments where coverage might have leveraged an extra joke in the edit - the moment when the man says thanks or thank you off screen after the smell expert says he smells like piss could have used a cut to the man in CU. You may have had that already, I don’t know. Also comedy in the edit in general. Say you had that CU of the man saying thank you I always think it’s hilarious to cut someone’s anguish off short, intercut another shot talking over him. Sound - just tinker with reducing that static background noise in the recording. Record ambient room noise and place that quietly in the background so the distinct dialogue can fade in and out of the new clearer room noise. Boom. Amazing sketch. Now go watch my tat. I need love. All the best! I loved the acting!


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Thanks! I appreciate the in-depth feedback. You make some really good points, and it'll def help me in the future. Glad to hear that the sketch cheered you up and thanks again for the kind words! !givelambda


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TheOneGoose

Well the video was pretty good and I enjoyed the comedy. The middle section went on for a little long talking about the piss, I get about the rubbing the point in but it just went on for a bit too long for me. The punch line was great though and well done. I liked the use of camera shots in this. All of that wok was well done. The thumbnail is one of the biggest things that needs work though. The background colour is a bit offputting and works to make the images look really washed out, the black border around the edge just looks odd and I dont get the font in a white box. All together it just looks like you gave up after the faces. Sorry to be so brutal but it just looks really bland. Anyway good job on the video, you just really need to work on your thumbnail.


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RepresentativeSoil31

Haha your acting was on point! I actually enjoyed the video, and tbh I didnt expect that for some reason🤷🏼‍♂️ it was really funny! I like how your faces are so zoomed in XD The quality is great, I think you can improve your audio a little bit, but I wouldnt worry about that for now! However,I dont like to say this, but I didnt really like the thumbnail. But maybe thats just me🤷🏼‍♂️ anyways, good work, and funny video


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tokyoyasss

Hey there! That was fun, I actually laughed throughout the video. Good script, good performances and good camera work (really nice angles, light and sound). That moving music while talking about his smell killed me. Nice touch with the third character. If I had to nitpick, I'd say it would have be nice to have a general shot of both of you, with the camera in front of you both showing your conversation, to have more different shots to play with on the editing. Also, it's difficult to read the text of your thumbnail when I see it in a small size (like on my phone) because of the colors you chose. Maybe it would be more effective leaving the original background while showing both of you in those photos you chose, like this: [https://i.ytimg.com/vi/zvC4dBaf--U/maxresdefault.jpg](https://i.ytimg.com/vi/zvC4dBaf--U/maxresdefault.jpg) Good job! Pretty funny! I just remembered you were the guys from 'Did you eat my chicken?', saw your video some time ago and was pretty funny. Keep it up! :D


Horns_Rules

Hey! Thanks so much for the praise and feedback! Hopefully we can get more cinematic soon, the more we do it the more we learn haha. I instantly went in and changed the thumbnail a bit so it should be easier to read. Glad you enjoyed the sketch and I'm happy you remember us from another video ! feels good. Thanks again. !givelambda


tokyoyasss

Yeah, now it's easier to read! You're funny, guys. Great job :)


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