The only flaw I can see is that this is the managers of this place, actually not knowing what's going on. This isn't a hard set rule, but if you want your post to be scarier, you usually want to have the people sending the message actually knowing what's going on, but not telling you. The rules should also probably creepier. Keep in mind though, I'm not that good at this either, I'm just trying to provide you with some constructive criticism


I like this! I think it went flawlessly.


it seems so normal that the subtle hints give it a really creepy vibe i love it!


I think it should be more scary like gotta die or some shit... but this is great tbh


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