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[OC] i drew Aubrey, tell me what you think & if there are some things i could improve on

[OC] i drew Aubrey, tell me what you think & if there are some things i could improve on

Okwss

Bat needs the nails, could make it abit thicker


plackisafajne

I actually forgot about the nails ( im still mad at myself for that) & yeah the bat could be a bit thicker i just didnt feel like re-drawing it, but ill definitely change it in my other drawings, thanks for the criticism btw


Okwss

Glad to help. Your better than what i can even do,don't beat yourself up fam. I only can draw stick figures...


plackisafajne

Well, if you keep practicing you'll be able to draw better than me! I know you'll get there soon!


Okwss

That said what software your using ? & stylus pen


plackisafajne

I made the sketch on paper and the lineart, coloring, etc. in ibisPaint X on my phone, i dont have a stylus pen


Okwss

Damn..


Lubiner

Art: 10/10 Scary: Nope Mari: Also nope Aubrey: YES


plackisafajne

ty!! <3


o-yasuminasai

btw, the facial expression is on point. You illustrated her personality and character really well while doing it in your unique style, quite brilliant honestly.


plackisafajne

I try to be creative with the facial expressions in my drawings, i like when i can get the general idea of a characters personality just from the face alone, sometimes its a bit difficult to do that in my style but i think it usually works out! Thank you so much!! <3


o-yasuminasai

Aye, It has definitely worked out really good this time! You captured her personality, as well as, her emotional traits really precisely, and your demonstrations of her demeanours through facial expressions and gestures are spot on. It reminds me of her canon quirky and confident self and her personalities instantly, all the while making it to be consistent with your own art style and philosophy. So good.


plackisafajne

Woah, that is a LOT of nice words, im not really used to people saying that about my art, haha tysm!!


o-yasuminasai

I’m no artist so whatever you make will definitely be better than anything I can come up with, and that I probably don’t know much about drawing either. Regardless of that, if I were to look into it deeper, it might be hard to demonstrate who she truly is, especially using your cute style. But you didn’t miss anything. She seem confident and up to a challenge. She’s a lil sassy and is doing her best to show her strong and competent side. The starred-eye girl she once were has grown up and found a way to become stronger and more intimidating to deal with her personal trauma, as well as dealing with those who she thinks might hurt her or her gang, while retaining some bubbliness and quirkiness. I think I just really like it. If you’ll ever draw Basil, man I would be super happy.


plackisafajne

Wooaahh, i dont know what words to use to express how grateful i am right now, thank you!! I actually decided to draw Basil next some time ago, its like you read my mind, haha, im just not sure if i should use pastel colors or the same ones in this drawing, what do you think?


o-yasuminasai

Then I am super hyped hahah can’t wait to see your take on my fave flower boy Basil. As for the colours, just do the style you deem as the most appropriate and best-looking one. I’m not the expert here.


plackisafajne

Yeah you're right, maybe i'll try both & see which one looks better, its about time i try different coloring styles, thanks!


o-yasuminasai

Thank you.


AshDrawsStuffYT

This is amazing!


plackisafajne

Thank you! <3


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plackisafajne

I didnt even notice that i forgot to add them, dang it. Thanks for pointing it out btw


Brockster17

This is amazing!


plackisafajne

Thank you so much!!


Zone_Gamer

the amounts of coolness are just high now


plackisafajne

Tysm!!


Restaurant_Wise

Perfect


plackisafajne

Thank you so much!! <3


VaccuumHelmet

0/10 there’s no nails on the bat. Just kidding, great art! I really like it. Maybe make the bit a little thicker but other than that, you did a really great job.


plackisafajne

Another person mentioned the same thing about the bat, maybe i should've tried a bit harder on it, thanks anyway!


Ithinkiplaygames

I really like it, especially how you handled the rim lighting and your color palette! I think adding shadows to counter the highlights would really help the piece feel a bit less flat.


plackisafajne

thanks! Im still practicing shading and i didnt want it to ruin the drawing, if that makes sense, but now that you mention it i should've probably tried to add it in, oh well, i'll try it next time


Ithinkiplaygames

No worries! I totally get what you mean, it sucks to add more to a piece and feel like you made it worse. Progress takes time!


plackisafajne

Yeah exactly! I'll try to add shading next time, and if it sucks it just means i have to practice more (or it just doesnt work in my style, who knows)


SalokinSekwah

Not very intimidating, but very cool


plackisafajne

ty!


JohnDecisive

GODDAMN THIS LOOKS COOL Only thing i don't like is your use of blue in her hair, but that's more of a personal thing


plackisafajne

Thank you!! The blue thing is supposed to be a highlight, i use different colors for them instead of a lighter base color, i just think it looks cool


JevilDeltarune2000

Woah!!! Epic!!!


plackisafajne

Thank you!!


JevilDeltarune2000

You're Welcome.


Ham_melt_man

That's so cool I love the colours in the background your art style is really cute 🥰


plackisafajne

Thank you <33


basilomori

I love the colors!!! and tbh imo u don't need to improve on anything it's already rlly good :)


plackisafajne

aww tysm!! <3


LucidStuff

This is really cool! i can’t really give much criticism other than i guess the bat needing nails but this is really good


plackisafajne

Thanks! I forgot about the nails on the bat, a lot of people pointed it out, i have no idea how i missed them


o-yasuminasai

Great art. Background’s a little flashy, still great art though.


plackisafajne

Thank you! Yeah, the background IS a little flashy, but i just really like the aesthetic of those vibrant rainbow colors, i understand it may not be for everyone tho


o-yasuminasai

Don’t worry, it’s a me problem lol. Nothing wrong with your art nor your standards


CrapMySenseofReality

Id change the background. Everything looks god damn phenomenal, but the way the background overlaps with the character is a bit unsettling


plackisafajne

I know the background is a bit too much, but i just really like the aesthetic of them, i get that not everyone will like it as much as i do tho, im trying different coloring styles so the next one is gonna be much simpler, thanks!


Rickfernello

Whow, she looks like a videogame character!


plackisafajne

Thx!


HoneyBeeWasTaken69

It great if you could draw sunny and aubrey together it would be cute (and yes i'm a sunburn shiper)


plackisafajne

Im not that good at drawing ship art right now, but i'm practicing! Maybe i could draw it sometime when i get better at it, thanks for the suggestion!


HoneyBeeWasTaken69

Even if you don't I would love to see more art made by you


plackisafajne

Im actually planing to draw more characters from OMORI, so you can look forward to that, i have 2 more drawings on my profile so you can check them out if you want to


dulledegde

if i have to say something is wrong your fingers could use some work


plackisafajne

Hands are very difficult to draw, i know they dont look that great but i'm still practicing


iamdino0

there might've been an issue with the compression, some of the pixels seem to be compressed into each other if you zoom in